Looking back at the storyboards for my first six pages, I'm generally pleased with the page layouts for most of them. Some pages (2 & 3) I feel though could be done better, so I played about with the page layouts a bit and came up with some minor changes:
Nothing too major, but I think they help the pages and the comic as a whole flow much better. Before the first few pages seemed like a collection of single images. Here's the final line art for the first six pages before it's tidied up and coloured (assuming I will colour it):
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